It's fitting that Shyamalan intended Lady in the Water as a bedtime story, because no matter how awake you are before you watch the movie, it will put you right to sleep. Shyamalan uses so much clunky exposition that there is hardly any forward-moving action. Shyamalan doesn't just break the "show-don't-tell" rule of screenwriting; he rejects the theorem as so much detritus.
Lady in the Water is a visual drone of muted colors embellished with a ham-fisted musical score by James Newton Howard (The Village). Newton isn't satisfied at only telling the audience what to feel with bombastic aural cues -- he wants to bulldoze the spectators into a corner and slap them around some. The effect is equally as deadening as Shyamalan's onerous attempt at story construction. The script screams pretentious affectation. Every time Cleveland calls out Story's name, it resembles Shyamalan's desperate cries for narrative help in filling out his movie.
If the film weren't already feeble enough, Shyamalan insists on upgrading his signature cameo performances in his own films to the level of featured supporting player. Shyamalan plays a novelist who lives with his "sister" in Cleveland's apartment complex. Forget that M. Night Shyamalan's acting skills couldn't get him cast in a high school production of Our Town. Watching a skilled acting craftsman like Paul Giamatti delivering lines to Shyamalan is like watching Robert Duvall discussing politics with his cat. It's the one thing in the movie that sent shivers down my spine.
Lady in the Water is nothing that it professes to be. Shyamalan calls it an "epic bedtime story" about a community of people drawn together to solve a series of riddles so as to save an angel and, consequently, humanity. There isn't anything on screen to connect Shyamalan's artificial Everyman characters to any lofty objective other than believing in artifice over reality. By the time the apartment complex tenants decode Cleveland's secondhand recounting of their duties in some convoluted myth or other, we realize none of it makes any sense. Even worse, we simply don't care about the story, or the characters, or any of it.
M. Night Shyamalan got incredibly lucky on his vastly overrated feature The Sixth Sense and has milked that unjustified success in four increasingly abysmal films: Unbreakable, Signs, The Village and now Lady in the Water. He has become the David Blaine of hack auteurs. And if David Blaine finds failure upsetting, I wonder how Shyamalan will face the day when his audience finally abandons him. (Rated PG-13)